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[fanarts_series]

 It's my first post with my new laptop, it's my first laptop, he's so little, i can read fics in my bed, rhoooo i  want to marrie  him but my husband didn't agree i bet. 
It's a lovely little compaq 610,with windows 7 and a screen 15 pouces.
So little, my old is so big with his 22 pouces but i love him to serve me so much. 

So guys, i'm happy and i wanted to kiss the postguy who was a post lady with a pretty smile, my husband said that i can make his naughty dreams come true kissing her but i said not way hon, instead i kissed him, it was so good to say thanks for the new babe to him. 

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[influ-bad-ence.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the new laptop babe. See now I would have kissed the mail lady for him- if she was okay with it- if only to shock him, lol.

I know you are trying to get better at English, and I am not nitpicking, I am only pointing this out because I notice you do it a lot. " I want to marrie him, but my husband didn't agree I bet."

Should be " I want to marry it, but my husband won't agree I bet." won't = conjunction of will and not will is present future tense.

Ex:
He won't agree. is an informal way of saying, He will not agree.

He will not agree = Il ne consentira pas.

[fanarts-series.livejournal.com]

Ok won't .... i shall try to remember..shall try is good isn't it ?